I say ignore the naysayers, Lucky girl, and write your journal however you want to. There are no rules. I've no idea if you have been copying and pasting other peoples journals but, if true, it's understandable given the way people criticised your first few posts.
My advice: don't let people bother you. Write little or write much, write articulately or in broken english, it matters not, people will always find fault when they want to.
So yeah, don't accommodate to their desires, accomomodate yours alone. Be you. Write what you want.
