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Old 11-02-2015, 10:08 AM   #33 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by Oriphiel View Post
How do you guys feel about Unseeing Eye? Personally, I thought it was fun trying to figure out what was going on. It kinda sounds like someone recounting a bad acid flashback that they had while walking down the street.
At times it felt like it could grow into something powerful, but it was overall to impressionist and vague to really have much of an impact. Trimming it a little might have helped.
Sorry Frown!
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