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Crazy Luv · 12-29-2005, 04:13 PM

Okay, this time it made sense. you didnt go off to far.

it could of done better without the last stanza though. again, work on the ending.

12-29-2005, 04:13 PM	#2 (permalink)
Crazy Luv a l'amou fou pou tout Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: NY Posts: 364	Okay, this time it made sense. you didnt go off to far. it could of done better without the last stanza though. again, work on the ending.