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Old 12-29-2005, 03:27 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by Alexisonfire
I think its way cliche.
Suicide is overdone and the songs can barely ever be done right.
This one isn't done right if your going to write about suicide.
You have to approach it at a unique angle, not the typical knife on skin father abused me girlfriend dumped me crap.

Suicide is overdone in songs. This isn't a song though. But on your point of viewing it on a different angle why? These are very valid reasons for suicide this shows bullying causing it. I have felt this before so makes it easy for me to make. What other reasons would I put for it live a happy life and have good friends Iwant to die. That would make it seem unreal.

thanks for the comment though
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