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Old 12-27-2005, 02:48 PM   #3 (permalink)
madeinNY
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hobo be nice.

They are cliche...but they're kinda real I guess. It's how you feel. And there's nothing wrong with that...but to me, my favorite part of a poem is trying to decipher what it means...what your stuff does is just straight up...maybe you should work on that a little
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