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Old 12-20-2005, 02:03 AM   #8 (permalink)
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yeah plug in baby a few of your lyrics do sound quite cliche. i think you could rethink some of these and make them a little less obvious. use less of the word heartache. matt i like your song except for the line about heart of stone. a heart of stone doesnt break so why are you singing about pain a girl has caused you? unless now you have a heart of stone after what she did to you.
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