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Originally Posted by DwnWthVwls
Post some bars up that you find impressive.. I was just trying to give examples of what I consider to be clever wordplay.
The use of holding cells in the second quote is pretty great to me. It's not easy to come up with double meanings, at least not for me.
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My comment wasn't intended to be a critique. I literally just wasn't sure what you were trying to communicate with your post.
Most lyrics out there, in any genre, aren't very impressive pieces of literature because they're a secondary aspect of the medium of music, written by people who couldn't hack it in a literary medium. I'd need some time to think of some that I find impressive.