I should perhaps make it clear that I'm not trying to put the dude down. Anyone who has the stones to make a journal and put their thoughts out there gets props from me (what am I doing, trying to be cool?)

but as Batty says, people have a lot of choice as to what to read here and if you want to attract people to your journal it does help to have coherent sentences and basic proper spelling. Not a criticism, as such, just advice. If you've decided to write, then you really should try to make the effort to make your writing as legible and understandable as possible.
Anyway, welcome to Journaltown, Norg, and expect to be featured in Sunday's update.