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Zezima · 12-01-2005, 08:18 AM

Yea, good word use but it jumps around to much. I'm pretty sure its about an X girlfrind or boyfriend, but its hard to tell. Last line needs to be changed. Its pretty lame...................

12-01-2005, 08:18 AM	#3 (permalink)
Zezima What should I type here?? Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: ATL, GA Posts: 63	Yea, good word use but it jumps around to much. I'm pretty sure its about an X girlfrind or boyfriend, but its hard to tell. Last line needs to be changed. Its pretty lame...................