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Old 11-30-2005, 01:35 AM   #1 (permalink)
tambo
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Default My First Try At Being Clever!

This song isn't finished yet-I didn't have time to finish it. But could you tell me if it is worth carrying on with?


Save the words til last/
I hate to think/
This wine washes down so nicely/
like your blood did down the sink

sounds are unwary/
silence is bliss/
Your acid tongue would spit venom/
I don't think you will be missed/
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