Hey! I am going to be completely honest with you since you are making such a conscious effort to get some honest feedback. I like the lyrics! They worked very well with the music, when I first read it I could tell it was quite poetic and wasn't sure how it would come across with the music but well done! The instrumentals are really well done as well. I do agree with Vince when it comes to the vocal. Leading up to the chorus was pretty good but once you got to the chorus I noticed you seemed to be a bit flat. This is absolutely normal and it happens to me and most other singers!! I think the problem may be when you are about to sing the higher notes or belt more you feel as if it is a "leap" and over think it which results in your throat muscles tightening and you end up pulling down the notes which causes them to fall flat....I hope that makes some sense! I remedy this by thinking "up" when I go to sing notes that I have sung flat in the past. As well, when you sing higher or louder try to pull your chin down rather than lifting it up which will strain you and make it harder. You can try this in an exercise alone, just start at the low notes with your chin up and has you go higher slowly lower it. Anyway, keep at it!! Good job!
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