BTW, I just glanced through your first page (sorry for not seeing it until late). My 2 cents is, it's nifty you've got some philosophic story/theme you want to craft the album around, but don't get too hung up on it. The purpose of music is, well, the music. Focus more on writing good songs, and following your theme should be secondary. Words that are vague and/or open to interpretation are OK, because sometimes you end up doing that just to get lines that rhyme. If a song doesn't state a message as strongly as you would have liked, because you were trying to fit some lyrics into these short melodic phrases you wrote, don't worry about it. The listeners won't notice, and even if they do, they won't really care very much.
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