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Originally Posted by Mankycaaant
It's too car crash to look away from. Must keep reading.
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I know. Somewhere in the middle I stopped laughing and was honestly creeped out, but nothing on Earth could have made me look away.
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Originally Posted by Mankycaaant
Okay, I've dedicated over an hour to my life in reading the whole story. TIME WELL SPENT!
It takes a completely unexpected swerve towards the end, the lack of a proper conclusion left me a little disappointed though.
It's likely the OP was arrested.
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As much as I would have liked a resolution, the twist at the end was perfect. A bit character all of a sudden became the second most important one?! Epic. And then she turns it around on him and turns him into her money slave? Even without an ending I am satisfied.