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Well yep, I'm working on a song called "Vampire" and it's about...eh, I won't say it if you can't guess it by the lyrics. X3

Anyways, I have some lyrics to it and I wanna know what you think about them. I don't have half of the lyrics, but only a few here they are:

Pre Chorus:

You make me feel alive again

Bring your neck closer to my hands
This is what my soul demands

Chorus:

So who's my next victim?

Bridge:

I’ve quenched my thirst but I love the taste too much (Dim the lights)
The smell of blood, boy, I’ll never get enough (Dim the lights)

Out from the closet or under the bed
Down to the carpets, your skin bled
From the basement or the attic
For the taste of blood, I’m an addict

--It's a real little bit, I know, but my personal favorite part of the song so far has to be the bridge. Those are probably the best lyrics I ever came up with.

So anyways, tell me what you think. If I can come up with anymore lyrics for the song I'll post them here.

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