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ThatBlueFluffyDude · 02-21-2013, 09:05 AM

I like the chorus, I think the verses need some work. The last two lines on the second verse is the only weak point for me really.

02-21-2013, 09:05 AM	#2 (permalink)
ThatBlueFluffyDude Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Midlands, England Posts: 50	I like the chorus, I think the verses need some work. The last two lines on the second verse is the only weak point for me really.