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Old 06-11-2012, 03:57 PM   #8 (permalink)
Henry.Fatih
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Originally Posted by 2paclives View Post
I've literally just written them down so dont be to mean lol

Dear God, it's me again wots happ'nin...
I'm feelin like a ship lost at sea, no captain
Runnin low like the net with no bandwidth
Wanna break free from this life I've been trapped with.

Dont think I'd still be breathin if it wasn't for music
People say im talented so im gonna use it.
Got a lot of stress in my life i wanna lose it
No one can change me forever spittin true ****.

Livin in this time things get kinda hectic
Sometimes i cant help but get so ****in apoplectic
By the time I'm paid I've already gone n spent it
My first words were '**** the World Bitch' an I'ma end it

I think I'll regenerate into a ****in dalek
Take over the world, Smoke an L, get my crotch kissed
Travel round the globe find a girl I wanna **** with
Take her home and Sonic ScrewDrive-Her in my TARDIS.
I don't know if this is a spoof, but regardless it is funny and creative. I can rap when I'm in the mood but I need another rapper to help me get the beet down.

Rap is poetic and I'm more of a poet than a musician. But for what it is it is good the rhythm is good and I don't know how old you are but this is some good stuff.
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