Music Banter - View Single Post - Just need some feedback for my lyrics... (There made in the style of a rap)

AliceN · 06-11-2012, 11:43 AM

The first verse is awesome--it really gripped me. Try expanding on it in a few different directions and see which you like the best. Not bad, but I think you have a ton of untapped potential here.

06-11-2012, 11:43 AM	#4 (permalink)
AliceN Groupie Join Date: Jun 2012 Posts: 6	The first verse is awesome--it really gripped me. Try expanding on it in a few different directions and see which you like the best. Not bad, but I think you have a ton of untapped potential here. __________________ Fight slavery and connect with fans using music--click here to find out more