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LoathsomePete · 03-23-2012, 12:06 PM

I enjoyed it, if you spend a little more time fleshing out the relationship between "you" and Amanda it could be a decent little short story.

03-23-2012, 12:06 PM	#17 (permalink)
LoathsomePete Cardboard Box Realtor Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Hobb's End Posts: 7,648	I enjoyed it, if you spend a little more time fleshing out the relationship between "you" and Amanda it could be a decent little short story. __________________ Last.FM 101 Albums That May Not Change Your Life, But I Really Like And You Might Too