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Jesus Christ I'm Amazing - The poetic updates of a madman
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phoenixflames
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The beginning verses are really good. I like those alot. As it progresses on, I feel like it breaks down abit. From after the second verse I would say. Overall though, really good IMO. Do you still write or did you only write for class?
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