Yeah Amen to boo boo comments. Not that I like him at all, but Read Walt Wittman, probably considered one of the more ideal American Poets. I hate him with a passion but read (crap its something like) As I kept a midnight Vigil) or somehting like that. I give you that one cause its not a 200-page epic. But try it.
And what I usualy do if I just need a rhyme is use Assonance that way it doesn't sound like complete crap yet keeps the lines somewhat tied.
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