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Old 12-26-2011, 06:53 PM   #9 (permalink)
Lisnaholic
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Originally Posted by DoctorSoft View Post
8/10

A fairly rare post
Rarer still, lisnaholic
This dude is the ****
^ Thanks !
7 or 8 out of 10, depending on how many syllables there are in *****



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Originally Posted by Ska Lagos Jew Sun Ra View Post
You guys are using 3-5-3 haikus? Schmucks! it's 5-7-5 or nothin!

I touch myself when
I think of you baby
Locked in my cellar
^ 6/10. Counting out on my fingers, I think you dropped a syllable from your middle line. Also, I think the previous ones log in at 5-7-5. That was certainly my intention.
What would the ancient Japanese masters have to say about the topic of your haiku ?


nice guy, Doctor Soft

something about his father

I can`t quite recall
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