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Salami · 12-26-2011, 04:39 PM

4/5
Nice imagery and not a word out of place.

A cool breeze flutters
through the leaves of the olives
My tears dry in the air

12-26-2011, 04:39 PM	#2 (permalink)
Salami Get in ma belly Join Date: Oct 2011 Location: Derbyshire Posts: 1,385	4/5 Nice imagery and not a word out of place. A cool breeze flutters through the leaves of the olives My tears dry in the air Last edited by Salami; 12-26-2011 at 05:32 PM. Reason: FaSho has no creative license