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DESTRUCT / POSITIVE NEGATIVES

All these birds flying at me
Looking to peck out my brain
I can't, why can't I wave them away?
I just let them eat me a little longer

Until...

I destruct
Throwing feathers every way
I destruct
And the birds fly away

Pretty bluebirds coming for me
Their eyes, they're just like me, insane
I want them to fall so bad, but they stay
As destructive positive negatives
It's hard to see now, but they make me stronger

I destruct
Throwing birdbrains like pain away
I destruct
And the world goes away


OUTRO:
One day, one day so soon
One birds crashes
Into bullet-proof glass
Drops into flaming trash
And soon, so soon after
The others follow suit

From the ashes
Littered with beaks and losing streaks
Rises the pheonix


I really want constructive criticism on this one, on how I could better the flow to make it easier to read... or anything else really, but the flow of this is really what's bugging me and I don't know how I can fix it atm.

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