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11-25-2007, 12:38 AM | #1 (permalink) |
Registered Jimmy Rustler
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RezZ's Songwriting Journal
I have been writing for a long time, and well in my opinion non literal songs are much better.
What i mean by this is when everyone posts there lyrics here, yes they make sense, and are understandable..but they lack thought and creativity from the writing and listening aspect. A good song does not outwright tell you what it is talking about, it lets you figure it our yourself hrough metaphores or anything else that would infer a real meaning. Maybe its just me, but i feel thats much better than just saying exactly what you mean. No song is about one thing, its supposed to be what the listener makes it.
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11-25-2007, 11:12 AM | #2 (permalink) |
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i agree totally! music should be made so that everytime to you listen to the lyrics, a new meaning could be used. Like yes, theres always a literal meaning. But the best albums are the ones where you have to sit there and think about everything it could mean and since everyone could have a different interpretation, the song becomes that much more versatile and artistic.
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12-15-2008, 12:24 AM | #4 (permalink) |
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A song idea, need lyrics and little advice.
I have uploaded the sample I made that my band will try to turn into a song tomorrow since we bought some studio time.
Since I have no room for drum set here I made similar drum beat using keyboard so bear with it. It is a 50 sec sample of the main rhythm and solo sections. (Keep in mind I wont be doing much of the soloing the actual guitarist will) Just tell me what you think and what I can improve on. The timing isnt perfect since its a ruff copy, but other than that its what I am showing them for an idea. I need some lyrics also, which I am having some trouble coming up with for this mood. So any ideas? Any help will be greatly appreciated. MEGAUPLOAD - The leading online storage and file delivery service
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12-15-2008, 12:37 AM | #5 (permalink) |
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I definitely hear a lot of potential there, with a little tightening up I think it could be a really great song. As far as picking the right lyrics for the mood I don't know but what the song made me think of is swanky new clothes and a friday night out on the town. Maybe that helps.
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12-15-2008, 01:07 AM | #6 (permalink) | |
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Lol funny impression to get. I was somewhat trying to imitate a progressive acid trip in which your thinking about your self. Sounds ****ing stupid but hey, what the hell.
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12-16-2008, 05:51 PM | #7 (permalink) |
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Ge Wiz thanks for all the help MusicBanter. Can always count on you...
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12-19-2008, 01:50 AM | #8 (permalink) |
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feel your feet lead you to the sky
like dying is meant for you and i i hope you stop to smell the roses hope you slip and split like Moses ihope you take my words i hope you read them well i hope you understand you gotta die welcome to hell i never knew a place like this existed |
04-13-2009, 10:21 PM | #10 (permalink) |
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Attempt at my first folk song.
[Fingerstyle 1 Intro]
G c D7 G Johnny had a station, riddled with rocks. G C Em He just wants the tangible truth. G C D7 G Johnny had a station, occluded by night. G C Em He just wants the counterfeit wiped. [Bridge 1] He hit the city and the damage was done. They bit his freedom, kept it for good. Now Johnny sits there askin' why they never understood... [Bridge 1] G c D7 G Johnny had a station, riddled with rocks. G C Em He just wants the tangible truth. G C D7 G Johnny had a station, occluded by night. G C Em He just wants the counterfeit wiped. [Fingerstyle 2 Outro] Just a simple relaxing folk song with a neat little chord progression and arpeggio intro/outro. The middle verse (and really the only verse) still needs a guitar/piano part. Will hopefully have the song recorded soon and posted with everything included.
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